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The applicant

GPA
3.7
SAT
1380
Activities
4
Awards
2

Section 01

Profile strength

The headline number is the average readiness across this applicant's school list, decomposed into the four dimensions the engine can measure from entered data.

Profile Strength

62/ 100

Competitive

based on 4 of 4 measurable dimensions

Measures how complete and competitive your profile is — not your admission outcome.

What we can see

AcademicCompetitive65
TestingCompetitive62
ActivitiesBuilding38
AwardsBuilding10

Expert Insights — Decision Doc

Get 3 in-depth qualitative reviews of your profile — Essay Strength, Application Strategy, and School Fit & Story. Part of the Decision Doc.

Essay StrengthData-based essay direction for your profile and target schools.
Application StrategyReach / Match / Safety balance + ED/EA timing for your top 3.
School Fit & StoryYour standout strength + the schools known for it, matched on more than rank.

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Based on official admissions data
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Section 02

Reach, Match and Safety

Every school on the list is classified by the same function School Match uses, from this profile's readiness against that school's published admitted band.

Your Schools(7)

Match1

Purdue University

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Reach1

University of Wisconsin–Madison

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Far reach2

University of Southern California, New York University

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Safety3

Michigan State University, University of Oregon, Arizona State University

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Activity tier breakdown

Activity impact tier — how admissions officers weight your activities.

T1National / International
0
T2State / Regional
0
T3School Leadership
2
T4Participation
2

Adding 1 T1 (National / International) activity could add ~8 pts.

Section 03

Per-school analysis

The same profile, read against two very different schools. Each card carries the profile-vs-admitted comparison and all five dimensions of strategic guidance, expanded.

competitiveness

USC values demonstrated interest, USC-specific story alignment, and a clear "why this school" beyond rankings — the profile needs sharper school-specific narrative.

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Profile comparison vs typical admitted

GPA
You 3.70 · admitted avg 3.85
23rd pct
SAT
You · 1380
13701530
Within typicalCollege Scorecard

Middle 50% of admitted students. A general fit signal — not an admission prediction.

28th pct
Activities
You 4
above
Awards
You 2
above

University of Southern California College Scorecard, IPEDS. Activities & awards weighted as Very Important at this school.

Strategic guidance for this school

At 53/100, your competitiveness sits in the middle of of University of Southern California's admitted profile distribution — driven primarily by GPA and SAT. With focused work over 9 months, this score can realistically move to 7181.

School Fit & Story

38

USC admits students who arrive with a USC-specific reason — Trojan Network, Annenberg, Marshall, or a named program — not just "strong academics in a sunny city." With a 3.7 GPA below the estimated 3.85 admitted average and a 1380 SAT sitting at the lower edge of the 1370–1530 middle 50%, the profile sits in the lower half of the admitted middle-50% for the 12% acceptance cohort, which means the school-fit narrative has to do more work to bridge the gap.

The current 4-activity / 2-award footprint reads as "balanced student" rather than "Trojan-shaped student." USC's holistic review emphasizes how an applicant uses university resources and contributes to a specific community within USC — Iovine and Young, Thematic Option, Resident Honors — so a fit story has to name the specific program or pathway you'd enter, not just the school.

The 9-month opportunity is to research 2-3 USC-specific entry points (named program + faculty member + extracurricular community on campus) and re-cast the supplements around them. This is the highest-leverage move because supplements weigh heavily when academic stats sit below the admitted middle.

Action plan (next 9 months)

  • Identify one USC named program (Iovine, Marshall World Bachelor, Thematic Option, named scholarship) where your current activity pattern visibly fits, and structure the "Why USC" supplement around that program — not the school overall.
  • Email or attend an info session with one USC faculty member or program director in your area of interest, and reference the conversation specifically in the supplement (USC tracks demonstrated interest).
  • Identify one current USC student-run organization that maps to your strongest activity, and write the second supplement around how you'd extend that organization's work — concrete, not aspirational.

— University of Southern California — College Scorecard · IPEDS

Application Strategy

32

USC's 12% acceptance rate places it in the high-reach tier for a 3.7/1380 profile. The honest strategic read: GPA sits below the estimated 3.85 admitted average and SAT lands at the lower edge of the 1370–1530 middle 50%, so the application has to win on the non-stat layers — supplements, school-specific demonstrated interest, and activity narrative.

Test-optional status is real for USC's recent cycle, which means the 1380 SAT can either be reported (you're just above the admitted 25th-percentile cutoff of 1370) or withheld (forces the rest of the application to carry more weight). Reasonable analysts split on this — submitting near the 25th-percentile cutoff signals "tested, in range" while withholding signals "betting the rest of the app is enough." With USC appearing to weigh both GPA and activities heavily, the activity narrative has to be the loudest signal regardless.

The 9-month strategic window: tighten the 4-activity portfolio into a clear thematic spine (one anchor activity with 2-3 supporting activities reinforcing the same story), and treat USC's supplements as the primary scoring surface. Apply Regular Decision; USC's Early Action is non-binding but doesn't yield-protect — RD allows the supplement to land alongside your strongest year-end activity update.

Action plan (next 9 months)

  • Decide on SAT submission by August: a retest landing at 1450+ moves you to the band midpoint and tips the submit/withhold call clearly toward submit. At 1380 you're inside the band but at the lower edge — submit only if the rest of the application carries a strong, USC-specific signal.
  • Compress the 4 activities into a 3-tier narrative on the Common App: one "anchor" activity (deepest, longest), 2 "supporting" activities reinforcing the same theme, and 1 "rounding" activity. Prune anything that doesn't fit the spine.
  • Apply Regular Decision (deadline mid-January). Use the November–December window to add one verifiable end-of-year update to the anchor activity — a measurable outcome, a recognition, or a leadership transition.

— University of Southern California — College Scorecard · IPEDS

Essay Strength

41

USC reads ~70,000 applications a year. The personal statement and the USC supplements (Why USC, Quote, Future Career) are the only places where a 3.7/1380 profile becomes a person rather than a number. Generic essays at USC equal a thin file at a 12% admit school.

The mid-stat profile pattern often defaults to resume-restating essays — describing the same 4 activities in narrative form. At USC's holistic-review bar, this is a missed opportunity. The personal statement should pick one specific moment (not one activity, one moment) that reveals how you think when no one is watching. The USC supplements should each do a different job: Why USC = program specificity, Quote = intellectual voice, Future Career = honest ambition with a concrete first step.

The 9-month essay window: draft the Common App personal statement by August, hard rewrite in September, USC supplements in October, final edits November. The biggest essay risk for this profile is playing it safe — at sub-median stats, a forgettable essay reads as confirmation of the stats, not as a counterweight.

Action plan (next 9 months)

  • Draft the personal statement around one specific 5-minute moment from the anchor activity — not the activity itself, the moment. Show the thinking that happened in those 5 minutes, not the outcome.
  • For "Why USC," name one program, one faculty member or course, one student org. Three specifics. No "vibrant campus," no "diverse opportunities."
  • Read the personal statement aloud to one person who has never read your resume. If they can't paraphrase what you care about after one reading, rewrite — the essay is doing resume work, not character work.

— University of Southern California — College Scorecard · IPEDS

Leadership Impact

35

USC appears to weigh extracurriculars heavily in the admission decision — likely on par with GPA. A 4-activity portfolio is fine in count but reads thin if it's 4 memberships and 0 leadership roles. At a 12% admit rate, "involved" doesn't differentiate; "led measurable change" does.

The pattern that lands at USC for sub-median-stat applicants: one deeply led activity (founder, captain, editor-in-chief, project director) plus 2-3 supporting roles that visibly reinforce the leadership theme of the anchor. Four activities all at "member" or "volunteer" level send the same signal as zero activities at this admit rate.

The 9-month leadership window: take a transition step on one current activity by November. The cleanest move is to inherit a leadership seat that opens naturally (outgoing senior in a club, vacant officer position, project lead for a specific initiative). Trying to manufacture a new title in 9 months reads as resume-padding; growing into an existing one reads as natural progression.

Action plan (next 9 months)

  • Pick one of the 4 current activities and ask the current lead: "What would the next year of this look like if I led it?" Document the conversation and the 3-month deliverable.
  • Convert one "membership" line on the Common App activities list to a measurable leadership line by December — a number of people coordinated, a budget managed, an event produced, a recurring publication shipped.
  • Decline new commitments for the next 9 months on anything that isn't reinforcing the anchor activity. Depth at USC > breadth.

— University of Southern California — College Scorecard · IPEDS

Awards & Achievements

28

USC's admitted profile tends toward applicants with 3-5 meaningful awards, with at least one at state or regional level. Two awards at this admit rate isn't disqualifying, but it leaves a clear gap — and because USC appears to weigh extracurriculars heavily, the awards line is read alongside the activities line, not in isolation.

The realistic 9-month award path for a 3.7/1380 profile is not trying to win a new national prize from scratch. It's converting existing activity depth into one credible regional/state recognition — a Scholastic Art & Writing regional gold key, a state science fair finalist slot, a regional speech/debate placement, a state-level community-service award through an existing organization (Eagle Scout, Gold Award, etc.).

The 9-month award window has roughly 2 viable submission cycles: winter (December-February deadlines for spring competitions) and summer (June-July deadlines for fall results). The strategy is to enter 2-3 well-matched competitions where you have genuine work to submit rather than 10 mismatched ones.

Action plan (next 9 months)

  • Identify 2 competitions or recognition tracks in your anchor activity's domain that have December–March deadlines and accept work from juniors/seniors. Application deadlines, not award dates.
  • Submit existing work — don't try to manufacture new project from scratch under deadline pressure. The strongest award candidate is the work you've already done at the deepest activity, just packaged for submission.
  • If one regional/state recognition lands by March, add a one-line note to the USC supplement linking the award back to the anchor activity narrative — closes the loop between "what I do" and "what's been recognized."

— University of Southern California — College Scorecard · IPEDS

competitiveness

The 3.7 GPA sits above Arizona State’s estimated admitted average and the 1380 SAT lands at the top of the middle 50% — a strong, comfortable fit where the story shifts toward honors and scholarships.

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Profile comparison vs typical admitted

GPA
You 3.70 · admitted avg 3.50
84th pct
SAT
You · 1380
11201380
Within typicalCollege Scorecard

Middle 50% of admitted students. A general fit signal — not an admission prediction.

75th pct
Activities
You 4
above
Awards
You 2
above

Arizona State University College Scorecard, IPEDS. Activities & awards weighted as Considered at this school.

Strategic guidance for this school

At 82/100, your competitiveness sits in the upper 30% of Arizona State University's admitted profile distribution — driven primarily by a balanced profile across all factors. With focused work over 9 months, this score can realistically move to 100100.

School Fit & Story

79

Against Arizona State’s ~88% acceptance rate, a 3.7 GPA sits above the estimated ~3.5 admitted average and a 1380 SAT lands at the upper edge of the 1120–1380 middle 50%. This is a clear safety: admission is highly likely, so the school-fit story stops being about clearing the bar and starts being about which door you walk through — Barrett (the Honors College), a named scholarship, or a specific major with selective entry.

ASU’s scale is the opportunity, not the risk. The applicant who treats a safety as an afterthought writes a generic "great weather, big school" supplement; the applicant who treats it as a real choice names Barrett, a specific learning community, or a direct-admit program and explains why that pathway fits the 4-activity narrative they already have.

The 9-month opportunity is to convert "likely admit" into "honors admit with merit aid." That reframes the entire application from defensive to opportunistic — the single highest-value move for a safety school sitting above the admitted middle-50%.

Action plan (next 9 months)

  • Apply to Barrett, The Honors College alongside the main application — the 3.7 / 1380 profile is competitive for it, and Barrett admission materially changes the ASU experience and the merit-aid conversation.
  • Identify one direct-admit or selective major that maps to the strongest activity, and write the supplement around that specific pathway rather than the university overall.
  • Submit the 1380 SAT — at the top of ASU’s middle 50% it strengthens both the admit and the automatic merit-scholarship tier the score qualifies for.

— Arizona State University — College Scorecard · IPEDS

Application Strategy

81

With admission highly likely, the strategic question at Arizona State is not whether but on what terms. The 3.7 / 1380 profile sits above the admitted middle-50%, which puts automatic merit scholarships and Barrett Honors College in reach — both of which are decided largely on the same stats already in hand.

Timing is the lever. ASU’s priority and scholarship deadlines reward early applications, and merit tiers are often tied directly to GPA and test-score bands. Submitting the 1380 SAT (rather than withholding) anchors the application to the band that triggers the higher automatic-award tier, which is a concrete dollar difference, not a soft signal.

The 9-month strategic window: lock the application in early, complete the Barrett supplement, and file the FAFSA/scholarship materials on the priority timeline. A safety handled well becomes the financial and academic floor that makes the rest of the list — the reaches — lower-stakes to pursue.

Action plan (next 9 months)

  • File the ASU application by the priority deadline to maximize both admission certainty and automatic merit-scholarship consideration.
  • Complete the Barrett Honors College application in the same cycle — it is the single highest-leverage add for this profile at this school.
  • Report the 1380 SAT to anchor the automatic-award tier, and submit financial-aid materials on the priority timeline rather than the regular one.

— Arizona State University — College Scorecard · IPEDS

Essay Strength

66

Arizona State’s general admission decision leans heavily on GPA and course pattern, and a 3.7 above the estimated ~3.5 admitted average clears that bar without an essay having to rescue it. That changes what the writing is for: at ASU the essays are a scholarship and honors instrument, not an admission one.

Barrett, The Honors College runs its own essay set, and ASU’s named scholarships often reuse or extend it. These readers are looking for intellectual appetite — what you read when nobody assigns it, what question you keep returning to. That is a different register from the "why this school" supplement a reach requires, and a recycled reach essay usually reads flat here because it is arguing for admission that is already likely.

The 9-month essay window is therefore back-loaded and low-risk: draft the Common App personal statement over the summer (it serves the whole list), then treat the Barrett/scholarship prompts in the fall as their own project rather than a copy-paste. The main failure mode for this profile is under-investing because the admit feels safe — and leaving merit money on the table as a result.

Action plan (next 9 months)

  • Write the Barrett essays as a standalone set in the fall, aimed at intellectual curiosity rather than at "why ASU" — the admission argument is already carried by the transcript.
  • Reuse the Common App personal statement unchanged, but add one paragraph anywhere ASU asks about academic direction that names the specific major or research area you would enter.
  • Before submitting, check every scholarship prompt on the ASU application for a separate word limit — truncated scholarship essays are the most common self-inflicted loss at a school this size.

— Arizona State University — College Scorecard · IPEDS

Leadership Impact

61

ASU lists extracurriculars as Considered rather than Very Important, which is consistent with an ~88% acceptance rate: the activity list is not what decides the admit. A 4-activity portfolio is entirely adequate for the general application, and nothing about it puts the admission at risk.

Where the portfolio does get read closely is Barrett and the competitive scholarship pools, which are selective inside an unselective university. There, four memberships and zero leadership roles is the same profile thousands of other admitted students bring. One documented leadership line — a role, a number, a thing that existed because you ran it — separates the merit-aid file from the ordinary one.

The 9-month window favors depth over addition. Adding a fifth activity this late reads as padding; taking over an existing one reads as progression. Target a role that opens naturally in the fall and can show a measurable result by the time scholarship review happens.

Action plan (next 9 months)

  • Convert one of the four current activities into a titled role by the fall, and record one number alongside it — people coordinated, events run, dollars raised, sessions taught.
  • Name that same activity in the Barrett application as the throughline, so the honors reader sees depth rather than a list.
  • Skip new commitments for the rest of the cycle; at a school weighing activities as Considered, a fifth thin line adds nothing the fourth did not.

— Arizona State University — College Scorecard · IPEDS

Awards & Achievements

54

For admission, the two current awards are immaterial: at an ~88% acceptance rate with a GPA above the estimated ~3.5 admitted average, the decision is effectively settled by the transcript. So this dimension is not an admission risk at ASU — it is a money one.

ASU’s automatic merit awards key off GPA and test-score bands, which the 3.7 / 1380 profile already satisfies. The competitive layer on top — named scholarships, Barrett awards, college-specific funds — is where a graded recognition does real work, because those committees are choosing among applicants whose stats are indistinguishable from each other.

The realistic 9-month path is the same as at any school: one regional or state-level recognition converted out of work already done, submitted into a competition cycle that closes before scholarship review. The difference at ASU is the payoff — the return here is measured in award dollars rather than in admission odds.

Action plan (next 9 months)

  • Pick the one competition cycle in your strongest activity’s domain with a deadline before ASU’s scholarship review, and submit existing work rather than starting something new.
  • List both current awards with an explicit level and placement on the application — unlabeled awards are frequently read at the lowest tier by default.
  • Check the ASU scholarship portal for college-specific awards tied to your intended major; those pools are smaller than the university-wide ones and reward exactly this profile.

— Arizona State University — College Scorecard · IPEDS

Section 04

Gap analysis and action plan

Weakest dimension first. Each block states the gap and then the concrete moves that close it, with the applicant's own numbers written into the steps.

01

Awards

Profile gap
15% of cap

You have room to add a level-graded award. Even one State / National-level award lifts the score meaningfully.

Action plan

  • Add 1 State or National award to move from 1.5/10 to 5.5/10 this cycle.
  • Re-list anything you forgot — Honor Roll, semifinalist, juried selections all count if you set the level correctly.
  • For Honorable Mention / Finalist results, set Placement explicitly so the score engine credits the rank multiplier.
02

Activities

Profile gap
30% of cap

Your activity portfolio leans toward Tier 3-4. Top schools weight Tier 1-2 heavily.

Action plan

  • Add 1 Tier 1 national-level activity to move from 6/20 to 14/20.
  • Convert one Tier 3 club role into measurable Tier 2 impact (state competition, regional leadership, quantified community impact).
  • Drop a low-investment Tier 4 line if it crowds out depth in your top activity.
03

Test scores

Profile gap
62% of cap

Test scores currently sit below the 50th percentile of admitted students at your target schools.

Action plan

  • Retake the SAT aiming for 1430+ — a 50-point bump from 1380 typically lifts your composite by 4–6 points.
  • Take an official practice test once a week for the next 4 weeks.
  • Focus prep time on your weakest section — the lowest section drags the composite the most.
04

GPA

Profile gap
65% of cap

Your academic subscore is below where admitted students at your target schools land.

Action plan

  • You're at 3.7 on a 4 scale. Aim for 3.9+ in the next two semesters to move into the admitted range at top targets.
  • Take 1–2 additional honors / AP courses in your strongest subjects this term.
  • If your transcript trends down, write a one-paragraph context note in the additional-info section.

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